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Old 11-19-2009, 09:11 PM
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How's my resume?

I'm trying to find my job, how does my resume look? If anyone knows good ways to find jobs please share!

Education:

►Walt Disney Elementary School
► Pine Valley Middle School
►California High School
►2008 Graduated from Venture High School
►2008 – Current, Diablo Valley College

Experience:

►2003 Little League Umpire
►2004 - 2005 Mc Donald’s Employee
►2008 Neoteric Solutions order processor

Skills:

►Extremely Computer Literate
►Great work attitude and ethic

Activities:

►Guitar and Music
►Rock Climbing and Hiking

Here is a pic of the format

http://img121.imageshack.us/i/111pan.jpg/
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Old 11-19-2009, 09:53 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

not totally positive, but I do believe that you are suppose to start out schools, jobs, etc from most recent to past instead of true chronological order, might want to research that part.

for future reference this should be a working document throughout your life if you find time to keep it updated, as it sure is easier to keep it in order than to try and research when the heck you worked where and what dates...lol
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Old 11-19-2009, 09:58 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

you should also omit your personal info.
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Old 11-19-2009, 10:16 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

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you should also omit your personal info.
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Old 11-19-2009, 10:38 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

you are a brave soul...

it would be wise to remove the personal information for your own safety. please consider how many members (both visitors and registered) visit this site daily and how many could potentially view your information.
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Old 11-19-2009, 10:48 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

Not to mention your Google will/probably has indexed your information, and the Spam bots will begin to harvest your e-mail rather quickly.
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Old 11-19-2009, 11:13 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

Try to list accomplishments in addition to titles and activities.
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Old 11-19-2009, 11:16 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

For education you don't need to list anything before high school.
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Old 11-19-2009, 11:19 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

Yup, reverse chronological order first; and should be no more than 3 listing. An employer doesn't really care that you went to grammar school. if you went to high school, or college, that much would be assumed.

Accomplishment or awards would be a good sub-section to have. i don't know what sort of work your looking for, but I'd try a technical breakdown of said skills. if someone was looking for you in a technical light, computer savvy won't get you very far, but far more specific.
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Old 11-20-2009, 11:58 AM
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Re: How's my resume?

It needs a little work, but its a good starting point.

I would change your layout around. Its looks very generic, you want something that will catch attention. Not over done, but something that looks like you put a little work into it.

Also you need to tailor your resume to the particular job your applying for.

Say your applying for a computer technician job. List all the different software, hardware and networking tools you are familiar with in a structured section. Use bullets to separate different fields.

Showing you what i mean would be much easier, shoot me a pm if you want some layouts to play around with.


I have a few of my personal resumes that i could send to you so you could take a look at the different formats and layouts if you would like.
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Old 11-20-2009, 12:15 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

Get a PROFESSIONAL looking resume template..
use the templates in word.

Omit anything before high school
Add what you are studying at college
list what you did and accomplished at each previous job
Do NOT type "extremely computer literate". that means absolutely Nothing.
Be Very specific about what you know about hardware, software, etc...
Add skills that would apply to job you are looking to get

have an objective to state what job you are applying for
AND
don't forget to write an Awesome cover letter to go with the resume and drop it off in PERSON
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Old 11-20-2009, 04:16 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

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For education you don't need to list anything before high school.
Agreed, and I'll take it a step further. High school education on a résumé is only relevant if a) you're still in high school and you're seeking PT employment, or b) you haven't attended a post-secondary institution or a trade school. If you have been working for a long time, all that needs to be listed is the name of the school and which years you attended: nothing more. Experience, in some cases, matter more than education, depending on the position.
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Old 11-20-2009, 09:33 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

thats a good place to start just pick one and replace info with your own.
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Old 11-21-2009, 05:50 AM
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Re: How's my resume?

ok thank you for the recommendations, I'm looking for jobs on craigslist and career builder. I'd really like a data entry job. What are some other good avenues?

thanks
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Old 11-22-2009, 09:29 PM
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Re: How's my resume?

Quote:
Originally Posted by astrochimp View Post
Get a PROFESSIONAL looking resume template..
use the templates in word.

Omit anything before high school
Add what you are studying at college
list what you did and accomplished at each previous job
Do NOT type "extremely computer literate". that means absolutely Nothing.
Be Very specific about what you know about hardware, software, etc...
Add skills that would apply to job you are looking to get

have an objective to state what job you are applying for
AND
don't forget to write an Awesome cover letter to go with the resume and drop it off in PERSON
people who interview others dont take word templates seriously.
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